On a happier note ... [="what a difference a beta makes, #3"]

[amedia]

I just feel it important to point out that, if it weren't for my beta-reader, Cain's nipples would not have made an appearance in Shivering.

Before beta:

"Hey! It's cold in here!" Cain protested.

"I can tell," Glitch said, amused. "You're all goosebumps." He stroked
his hand down Cain's exposed chest and Cain found himself shivering from
something other than the cold. Abruptly Glitch let go of Cain's wrists.
"Take your pants off," he ordered. Cain hesitated. "Now," Glitch said,
with a cold command in his tone.

After beta:

"Hey! It's cold in here!" Cain protested.

"I can tell," Glitch said, amused, as he finished with the vest and unbuttoned the shirt beneath. "You're all goosebumps." He stroked his hand down Cain's exposed chest. Cain shivered as Glitch's hand brushed deliberately over his nipples; when Glitch circled his navel with one lazy finger, Cain gasped and arched his back.

Glitch let go of Cain's wrists. "Take your pants off," he ordered. Cain hesitated. "Now," Glitch said, with a cold command in his tone.

Comments

[amedia.livejournal.com]

Honey... my mind was there before I even typed it...

I believe you! Great minds, parallel gutters. ;-)

RC is now and forever Adora Cain's father.

Great casting! I can get behind that one. (And not just because I wanna see ... ahem.)

[erinm-4600.livejournal.com]

Yeah... I'm trying to justify Adora's parents fics now....

Damnit, Steve!